its all his faulght not yours at all

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    its all his faulght not yours at all

     i wanted what we used to have
    but know its gone
    i want it bad

    the things you thought
    they werent true
    i just wish i didnt listen to her
    that little one she told me no
    and know its just too late you say
    cuz you were what she wanted to day

    and now that she is with you
    i understand
    cuz you were playing me
    i wish that he had never done what he did to you
    for if not i wouldnt be missing you

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    Chaos128 commented on its all his faulght not yours at all

    08-01-2009

    You came out the other side, Slipkind, and you came out stronger. Remember the past so you don't make the same mistakes, but don't dwell in it because then you can't move forward. Very nice writing and sharp technique.
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    FilthMcNasty commented on its all his faulght not yours at all

    06-01-2009

    Dont miss someone who played you. He doesnt sound like someone worth missing/or even thinking of. Think of him as a lesson learned. Never a regret!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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