left by you

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    left by you

     you said we would always be friends
    you said youd be there to always lend a hand
    little did i know you would turn around and leave me 
    you left me here to suffer the embarrasment of crushes
    its all better the boys are nicer ecept austin were fighting
    but im friends with noah ethan james zac and more
    wow this isnt even a poem any more

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    Shelbylolann commented on left by you

    03-02-2011

    Yeah! :) I miss you guys... Sorry I left. :( :)................ Great wriyte.... 10 here......... LOVE SHELBY
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    Phission commented on left by you

    12-27-2010

    i love this ! this is what poetry should be and what i adore about your words. it starts out as a poem of sorts and then turns into a note and reflection. i love this ! 10
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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