i saw u

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i saw u

i saw u sitting next to me
i saw u sitting across from me
i saw u looking into my eyes
i saw u breathingeat carefully
i saw u breathing hard
i saw u eat the food
i saw u drink the water
i batted my eyes
i breathed along
i ate and drank beside u
now what
     PUPPY!!!!!

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brandice commented on i saw u

04-03-2011

WOW WHEN I READ THIS RIGHT NOW I FORGOT WHAT IT SAID SO I WAS SHOCKED WHEN I READ THE FINAL WORD... PUPPY? REALLY? WOW!!! I HAD NO IDEA...

Shelbylolann commented on i saw u

03-02-2011

LMAO I LOVE IT CANDI! TTYS! 10 HERE!!!!!!! :) LOVE SHELBY

brandice commented on i saw u

10-28-2010

OFCOURSE I LIKE IT i wrote it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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