L0VE..MyTH0UGHTz &&0PiNi0Nz

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    This is by far more than a poem to me..its the TRUTH!! Things like this happens to ppl all the time..cried as i typed, thats how deep it touched me..

    L0VE..MyTH0UGHTz &&0PiNi0Nz

    0H iJust LuV this topic!!
    L0VE!!
    What it is ...how u feel when ur in it ...the Joys of it ...&&the heartache it can bring ...the Advantages &&Dis Avdvantages ...The Plain ole good && The Plain ole bad!! ...what to do ...what not to do .....Have iEver been in love?? YEP!! Love is something sacred &&can be a wonderful thing!! Love is seen to some ppl as OVER RATED &&a phrase that's just thrown around ...&&yet some wonder why they cant find love ....why love don't love them....Fact is, Love CAN'T be FOUND!(My 0pinion) You can't go looking for something you have no idea ur in!! Love can be sneaky as well ....you can think "its just a crush...or something innocent" but in reality you don't wanna be anywhere else! You don't wanna mess w/tha chick down tha street...tired uh yah naggin ex's....tired of searchiN for someone because you know what u already have!! You find urself waitiN on that phone call...or Gettin mad cuz that someone don't text back fast enough!!(ya'll know what I mean!) ....or u find urself doing things u never thought u would do for someone...stepping out of ur built comfort zone for that person....ya'll do everything together...you tell them every secret &&open ur heart so wide, u bleed happiness!! You know when all else fails, you have them in ur corner(no matter what!) ...that person is the only person who can make you feel higher that NASA's Space station...&&also the only to make u feel lower than the Ocean floor!!! ...but u know they mean well even when they make mistakes....you can't stay mad at that peron for too long ...can't hold a grudge against them....Love can make u do crazy things!! YEEEAAHH ya'll know!! Jazmine Sullivan said it best, "I'll Bust The Windows Out'cha Car!" Love will make you l0SE Ur MiND!! ....&&can cause heartache....the person ur in love w/knows u BEST! They know all ur buttons! What to say to make u feel low &&put u down....Love creates MAj0R obsticals in relationships...MAj0R Battles...MAj0R arguments...MAj0R disagreements....Love foces u to make difficult decisions...put u in challenging situations....&&can have MAj0R consequences...Love comes in all kinds of ways and forms....some pass up love because of what's on the outside or because of petty reasons...BEAUTY is BY FAR more than just skin deep!! &&that's REAL!! Love (as I mentioned before) can make u step out of ur "box"(comfort zone) ....but its up to u to accept it....fulfill it &&enbrace it!! Some are afraid to give love a chance because they've been hurt before or they don't wanna get hurt again....take it from gabby babies, Y0U WiLL WANT T0 BE l0VED!! Especially if u've been in love before!! It feels great to love but most of all being L0VED is an AMAZiNG feeling!!! It feels good to know you have that someone who has that UNC0NDiTi0NAL love for u....they wanna be ur Protector...your pastor....your counselor....your best friend....when you feel like N0 0NE loves or cares for u....that someone ur in love with is there to hold you in open arms....love u for u....don't judge u or mistreat u....ULTiMATELY, some have lost the sight of what REAL love is....some give up on their relationship because they feel like "man she/he don't love me! I love him/her though...im giving up cuz im not being loved in return!" Fact is people .....we don't love to be loved! We L0VE 2L0VE!! Evidentally, ur love must have not been true....cuz when ur in love the last thing on ur mind is u wondering do this person love you back!! Love have u so geeked up on that person all u can think about is H0W 2L0VE THEM M0RE 0r BETTER!!!....live yah life!! Laugh and love...when it fails, all u can do is get up &&start over! Move on....&&Keep U at heart!! Well those are my thoughts and opinions on it!!!

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    afresh30 commented on L0VE..MyTH0UGHTz &&0PiNi0Nz

    07-08-2009

    that was extremely unappealing, the spelling, grammar, this is one you should have kept locked in your personal notebook, its repeatitive and unfocused, keep trying, just my opinion.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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