[[G00dBYE]]

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    [[G00dBYE]]

    When everything got hard
    You ran from me
    I wanted you so close
    It seemed like we could never be
    Distant lovers is what plays in my head
    Like J. Holiday
    I want you in the back of my lac
    So later on i can put you to bed
    But you'll never understand what I mean to you
    Im brain dead
    My body feels cold
    Now my face turnin' blue
    Man, now that you're gone
    I feel so alone
    Yellin like Monica
    HELL NO!
    DONT LEAVE HOME!
    In my heart you dwell
    Baby i cant lie
    Guess I really dont know when its the
    right time to say G00DBYE..

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    hdmac commented on [[G00dBYE]]

    09-02-2009

    I don't like some of the common letters you used in your writing.
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