[[G00dBYE]]

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    [[G00dBYE]]

    When everything got hard
    You ran from me
    I wanted you so close
    It seemed like we could never be
    Distant lovers is what plays in my head
    Like J. Holiday
    I want you in the back of my lac
    So later on i can put you to bed
    But you'll never understand what I mean to you
    Im brain dead
    My body feels cold
    Now my face turnin' blue
    Man, now that you're gone
    I feel so alone
    Yellin like Monica
    HELL NO!
    DONT LEAVE HOME!
    In my heart you dwell
    Baby i cant lie
    Guess I really dont know when its the
    right time to say G00DBYE..

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    hdmac commented on [[G00dBYE]]

    09-02-2009

    I don't like some of the common letters you used in your writing.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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