JUST DON’T GIVE UP

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JUST DON’T GIVE UP

We come from a World
Full of Pain and Anger
There are struggles in Life
But you have to remember

He is right by your side
He feels your sorrow, he hears your cry
When the door opens for him
Your struggles will abide

Sitting down, Spacing out
Wondering what to do
All sorts of things run through your mind
Yet, he’s still right next to you

Don’t give up, with struggles appearing
While the devil is working don’t give in
Our Lord hears our prayers
Its at his hour, your time will begin

It’s hard on earth’s life
Eternal soul is forever
He’s here for you and me
And to leave us…He’ll NEVER

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bud91355 commented on JUST DON’T GIVE UP

04-17-2009

a lovely prayer of hope and faith. I like meter rhriming try the next one with 19/20 silables

Drivingczar commented on JUST DON’T GIVE UP

04-09-2009

Beautiful write! More! More!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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