Daddy I Need To Know

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    Daddy I Need To Know

    Have I done any wrong ?
    to have you desert me.
    Am I so very bad ?
    that you had to set me free
    I know that you love me
    You're just not showing it
    And if you try to give it a chance
    you'll never want to quit
    Just take a chance and open your heart
    to see what love can do
    It'll make you not want to leave me
    it hurts to know that I am loosing you
    Now why can't your love be strong
    as that feeling used to be
    Am I the reason you had gone away ?
    Daddy...Please tell me
    Daddy, I really need to know
    WHY DID YOU PACK YOUR LOVE TO GO ??

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    bud91355 commented on Daddy I Need To Know

    04-17-2009

    very strong and beautiful handling a common hurt today. The meter isn't consistent, but this may your style. Is '' your love to go'' a take off on a fast food store?

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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