Jasmine...

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  • Love
    • JayDavid
    • is thinking... I think too much. Its slowly killing me.

    Jasmine...

    Does she move you with one look, or do you think of it as a phase?
    Does she remind you of a book, keeping you stuck to every page?

    Does it make ur blood boil when she hugs another man?
    Do you soon after get enraged, and find it hard to understand?

    Has she come into your life like a cooling breeze?
    Then leave the same way she came in- with ease?

    So, how can you track your new found love?

    You wonder.
    Maybe she'll come back, maybe she won't.

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    cherise1 commented on Jasmine...

    04-21-2009

    my style of writing there i loved it

    anniebloom commented on Jasmine...

    04-20-2009

    i love it.. i love the title, love the flow of poem n end of it. i love jasmine too. very good. check out my poem too, i'm sure there r lots of them that u might like it

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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