JAIL

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    JAIL

    LOOKING AT THESE WALLS,
    WALKING DOWN THESE LONG HALLS,
    WONDERING ABOUT LIFE,
    THE LADY THAT I WISH WAS OR IS MY WIFE,
    EVERDAY IN THIS JAIL,SEEMS LIKE A LIVING HELL,
    TRING TO MAKE IT TO THE LASTDAY,
    AND LISTENING TO WHAT EVERYONE HAS TO SAY,
    PEOPLE TRIPPING AT OTHERS AS THEY WALK THE FLOOR,
    NEVER KNOWING WHAT THEY MIGHT MISS OR SEE,
    WAITTING FOR THE DAY THEY WILL BE FREE.

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    mmichelle97219 commented on JAIL

    02-13-2009

    There is a nice cadence to this poem. It just dances off the tongue when read aloud. The only suggestion I can make is to not write in all caps. You are not shouting at people. Really nice work. Happy Writing Michelle

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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