Invisible

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  • Sadness

    Invisible

    Am I somebody, to anybody?
    I feel like a nobody.
    Who am I inside this flesh,
    this body, that I feel so uncomfortable in?
    Am I more than what you see?
    Blood and bones and skin.
    Do I matter to you,
    when I don't even matter to me?
    Do I exist if noone can see,
    who I am or what I need?
    How do I go on when I can't even breathe?
    How can I breathe,
    How can I breathe?

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    Len commented on Invisible

    04-29-2014

    OOOOHHH BOY! Do I know that feeling, you have put into words like an artist painting a portrait, every word a masterful brush stroke, every question digging deeper into that dark place. Great write

    windsongs commented on Invisible

    06-14-2011

    stay and express ur thoughts-give hope to those who see u!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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