Intoxicated

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This was written in honor of Ms Halle Berry. lol I know I know!!! It is also in honor of all women who display their beauty both inside and out.

Intoxicated

Drunk in a stupor of lingering passion

Under influence of a beauty I bask in

Inebriated is this heart that drives

My toxicity to an all new high

I’m addicted to her beauty so I drank from her cup

I stagger and I stumble; I’ve fallen and can’t get up

Ticketed with a D.U.I. for sipping on her love

Obsessed with having more because less is not enough

 

Girl I’m intoxicated

My soul is inundated

I’m so inebriated

I’m intoxicated

 

There in the essence of her beauty’s mixture

Is my heart and soul’s elixir

A concoction of a beauty I can’t resist

Love’s potion brews when I’m in her midst

My heart is over saturated; My soul is so inundated

People ask if I can shake it; She’s a habit I can’t break it

Cause I feel so inebriated and I feel so fully elated

She has my heart and soul sedated with a beauty that’s intoxicating

 

Girl I’m intoxicated

My soul is inundated

I’m so inebriated

I’m intoxicated

 

 

Copyright2010 by Kenneth J Thompson

 

 

 

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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