In Your Eyes

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    In Your Eyes

    The oceans' nice and calm,
    God's beautiful painting, shown in the beautiful night sky.

    The sound of the waves,
    Crushing over the rocks.

    The stars shining so brightly,
    In the clear, midnight blue sky.

    The soft sand,
    That covers your feet when you walk.

    The sound of the wind,
    Blowing in your face, like an angel's whispher,
    Whisphering in your ear.

    The sound of the sailboats, sailing by.

    It is the most beautiful place in the world,
    And I can see it all, in your eyes.

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    arunpuri commented on In Your Eyes

    02-26-2009

    It's only that you have taken your heart out. Adding more substance will only add to its richness... But the feelings are coming out well.

    Lovesong commented on In Your Eyes

    02-15-2009

    I cannot agree more with ccslim's comments. The poem needs more substance.

    ccslim commented on In Your Eyes

    01-26-2009

    Nice poem and it can contain more of what you see inside!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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