im not alright

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    im not alright

    To whom it may concern
    I'm not writing this for you,
    I'm writing this for me,
    to let out all the sadness and pain,
    that other people cannot see,
    most people think I'm dumb,
    but they just don't care enough,
    to see through me,
    they think I'm OK,
    but really I'm not,
    they think just because i smile,
    I'm happy,
    but in reality thats far from the truth,
    I'm the girl, that has death on her mind,
    never thought she can go through life,
    cuts on her wrist, just to show that shes alive,
    people cringe at the sight,
    they just don't understand,
    just because I'm not them,
    they think they have a right,
    to judge, spread rumors, and make me cry at night,
    once again,
    ill never be OK,
    sleeping all day, sleeping all night,
    Do you listen I'm not alright

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    Tempestlady commented on im not alright

    10-10-2009

    Who cares what they think, be yourself and be a friend. Find the sunlight and change your perspective or your camera lense. Get a way, even if just for the day, change your routine, it aint nothin but a thing. Help out another, soon you will discover it about what you can do, especially for others. Loved the poetry, liked the rhyme, when i was seventeen, i too used to cry all the time. Be bright, be wierd, but most of all be...Write on...

    KerryPrater commented on im not alright

    06-29-2009

    You stand in the shadows, it's but a step to the light There are others of us here, you don't have to cry all night You've paid in blood and pain, now claim life as your birthright. And just to cover all your bases, boost you along double your vitamin A intake and increase your heart rate for 15 min. straight. It wont magically cure all of your agony, but it WILL help. I know, I live in that place of pain where you are.

    JaLaw commented on im not alright

    02-07-2009

    Be strong!

    JaLaw commented on im not alright

    02-07-2009

    All of your poems are deep and seems to pour from your wounds. What God made/makes is perfect. Satan and Man lies to us. What we are (flesh, marked by death) is totally different from who we truly are (spirit, marked by life). You are beautiful. Be s

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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