Honestly

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    Honestly
    Honestly, Do you care?
    Honestly, What would you do if i wasn't here?
    Honestly, would you kiss me?
    Honestly, would you hold me?
    Honestly, would you run, if you knew the real me?
    Honestly,would you attend my Funeral?
    Honestly, Do you even Liston to what i say?
    Honestly, I'm to lost to be saved!!!

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    Tempestlady commented on Honestly

    10-10-2009

    Honestly the world would be less without you, honestly someone would go without a kiss, honestly all of us have a dark side it wouldn't keep me from liking you, honestly a funeral is not for you anyway its for them, honestly if your lost you have to be found. If your in danger i would save you. You are a child of God and have just as much right to be here as anyone else. You have a purpose as this piece shows. Liked the questioning form, loved the eternal questions of adolescence, loved the brutal honesty. Honestly. Write on....
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    EinStud commented on Honestly

    08-02-2009

    It's not you, it's just me and how I am. I really don't care. You have to save yourself, by putting yourself in winning situations. (I'm reacting to the poem, not you) Here's an exmple: You ever notice that the Dallas Cowboy football players seem to find trouble late night at a bar when it's close to closing time? but you never hear of the football players getting busted at the Library or Childrens Hospital. No. Get unlost and find the best opportunity to succeed. Peace Out, EinStud
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    SpiritSong commented on Honestly

    07-12-2009

    thank you xxhonestyxx...these are such human and raw thoughts, very well expressed...I love the last line...as salvation is of Him who loves us most and as we turn to Him in understanding and trusting obedience...the impossible suddenly becomes a miracle of possibilities...and a broken vessel is always the requirement to the entrance of such light, wisdom, truth, knowledge and understanding..turns what the enemy meant for our harm..and recreates it into an prodding iron to lead us to good, and the answer we so seek. Loved it thanks... Honesty..
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    JaLaw commented on Honestly

    02-07-2009

    Can the hand hide from the arm? Can the shadows hide where no shade is when the sun is up? Neither can anyone hide from God. No one is too lost to be saved!!!
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    Sassy3 commented on Honestly

    12-13-2008

    I feel every word you reveal, totally awesome. I'm Sassy3 and i am new so if u want to talk accept my request, i'd like to hear more of what you got!!!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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