I'm alone, with you!?

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    I'm alone, with you!?

    I'm alone, with you!?

    I am sitting in my car.
    I laugh out loud, I look around.
    To make sure that no one sees me. The hell with it, I'm alone with you.
    I'm seeing purple pansies, and daises.
    Crossing my mind, I see you, shining just like that dime.
    In my knock-off gucci, which the straps are about to break. I look in my purse and found something that reminded me of you.

    I'm alone with you.

    I'm walking into a local Walmart, shopping and hopping around on my cart. I began to laugh aloud again, and this time I really don't care who seees.

    I'm alone with you again...

    You see you have that special thing, that quality. That love in your smile, that style , that masculinity. That sway to brighten my day. That swagger, that butter, that beautiful skin tone, that essence of a man, that on only you can posess. Cause I try to pick them by hand. Your not my man your just someone that I pursued, so in a way I stopped the game of cat and mouse.

    Most poparily your beautiful you see, to me, cause I'm alone and always of course
    your with me.

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    Grommet commented on I'm alone, with you!?

    06-07-2009

    Bella, I like your style. I'd like to suggest that love and passion be distanced from Walmart and Gucci, they are so unnecessary to your message. stay true to yourself and not send the strip mall inot our lives of passion. Let me know if you can tweak this again and carry the same tone of your message,I think it has great potential. G

    BellaStorm

    06/07/2009

    Thanks you for your comment. I will leave this poem the way that it is.. Love, Gucci, and Walmart all fall in the same realm.. That is why I included it in this poem.. The is special to me... Thus when I think about a certain person that I wrote this poem about, everything comes into play...

    Bonofied commented on I'm alone, with you!?

    03-22-2009

    very good use of words

    brandon commented on I'm alone, with you!?

    03-15-2009

    good job keep it up

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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