IloveUGoodbYe

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    IloveUGoodbYe


    I remember when I say yes
    It was one of the greatest gift
    For long years, my life revolve around you
    I never wait for the time you and I fall apart

    I was damn stupid
    For making your life complicated
    I thought everything is alright
    But here I am, waiting for miracles to happen

    How I wish you will be here again
    Here at my side, holding my hands
    Lying in your shoulder and closing my eyes
    But it’s all my fantasy…I know it’s just a reverie

    My eyes now see reality
    Reality that one day you’ll be happy
    Contented of God’s blessings
    And hoping that someday, you will forgive me

    Before I leave, I just want to say
    That my love for you never fades
    Whatever you do, wherever he are
    All I’ve done is for your own happiness

    If one day, you glimpse a shadow of me
    Never look straight, nor gaze
    I never want you to witness my downfall
    Because my devotion to love you never died away



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    mpjtforever commented on IloveUGoodbYe

    08-13-2009

    very nicely written. I too have been caught up in losing that someone that I loved. keep the faith and keep on writing you have potential to become a great writer, your new friend jodi. read some of my poems. I think you will find we have some in common.

    wubuj

    05/11/2010

    hi jodi :)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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