IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK

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    IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK

    LYING IN MY BED I THOUGHT…
    IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK
    I WONDER WHAT THEY WOULD SAY
    WOULD THEY SPEAK OF UNDYING LOVE
    WOULD THEY TELL OF SEXY RENDEVOUS
    OF CLINCHED FISTS, TUSSLED SHEETS, AND WET KISSES

    WOULD THEY ECHO THE MOANS OF HIM
    HE, STANDING, GROANING FROM THE HEAT OF HER MOUTH ON HIS DICK….
    WOULD THEY RELAY THE SQUEALS OF DELIGHT FROM HER WHILE
    SHE TWISTED, TURNED, AND CLINCHED HER KNEES ON HIS EARS GRASPED HIS DREADS TO BRING HIS FACE CLOSER DEEPER…..CAUSE SHE CAME CLOSER TO COMING AS HE CAME CLOSER AND DEEPER.

    WOULD THEY TELL THE STORY, RELAY THE WORDS WHISPERED BEHIND THE CLOSED DOORS BETWEEN THOSE FOUR WALLS.
    HE FROM BEHIND AND THEN ON TOP.
    SHE FROM THE SIDE AND THEN ON TOP.
    RIDING AND PANTING, EVERY BREATHE OF VOICE SEAPING INTO THE PAINT ON THE WALLS. SPILLING OVER ON TO THE FLOOR MIXED TOGETHER WITH THE BEADS OF SWEAT POURING OFF OF THEIR BODIES.

    OH MY, IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK, THEY WOULD RELAY THE CALLS TO THE HEAVENS, THE NAME SPOKEN OVER AND OVER, OVERLAYING THE CONSTANT QUESTION OF POSESSION. “WHO’S IS THIS…..”

    AND THEN SILENCE, EVERYTHING SILENT, JUST THE AIR THEY BREATHE, JUST THE AIR I BREATHE. LYING HERE REMINISCING AND WONDERING IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK. ….

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    FLAWLES commented on IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK

    05-18-2009

    If those walls could talk, they would say, "thank you".

    sxygrneyes874 commented on IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK

    04-30-2009

    Like the subject. love erotic detail, keep it up ;) (no pun intended)

    graceladymn commented on IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK

    03-15-2009

    To be so in to one another-lost in the sharing they express. Good piece of work trying to express the inexpressible mystery, yet even in our fumbles the moves live on.

    crossguided commented on IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK

    02-14-2009

    Not candid at all. I live it. It could have been writen in a more mysterious. This poem seems very indie.

    danee8807 commented on IF THESE WALLS COULD TALK

    11-18-2008

    I love it!!!! I think its wonderfully wriiten and so true, some people lack that in their poetry the realest, the feelings, and you provided it.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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