I wish we had not been

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    I wish we had not been
    Like a broken road
    Never reaching abode
    I wish we had not been

    Like a tear that neither falls nor dries
    And a truth that is kept beneath the lies
    I wish we had not been

    Like words that could never reach your lips
    And a chance before I notice slips
    I wish we had not been

    I wish we had not been so far
    When close we cud be as we are
    I wish we had not been

    Copyright@2007 FARIDA

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    purpleswan commented on I wish we had not been

    06-04-2010

    Beautifully stated and felt. Lovely write.....Swan
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    gogant commented on I wish we had not been

    06-04-2010

    Sometimes wishing is all one can do to help a sour situation become sweeter...............Truly special, Farida.................gogant
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    Gabriel85 commented on I wish we had not been

    03-04-2009

    Excellent. Is this your poem or is it from another poet? I love it regardless, just wondering about the copywright on the bottom.
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    serene

    05/31/2009

    i wrote it! thanx for the appreciation

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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