I Want YOU

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    I Want YOU
    I want YOU

    I want you…
    I want to know everything there is to know about you.
    Your inner mystery intrigues me.
    Your conversation draws me into you.
    Makes me desire you and thirst for the wells of your soul.

    I want you…
    I want to touch you.
    Your defined features fascinate me.
    Your beauty is immeasurable.
    Makes me crave time with you.

    I want you…
    I want to love you.
    Love you like no other woman can possibly love you.
    Your breath and pulse as mine.
    Your laughter and sorrow as mine.
    Makes me want to become one with you.

    I want you…
    I want to complete you

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    sammia commented on I Want YOU

    07-22-2009

    WOW im lost for words..(good thing)... very good I like the flow of this. My favorite part of this piece is "maks me want to become one with you." I just love that line. Very good. -Samm
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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