I Try

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    I Try

    I try so hard to please my mother,
    but at some point I know I must stop.
    So I try to take care of my sister & brother
    On achieving my goals to reaching the top.
    Knowing my mother has no trust in me
    and thinking I'm going to fail.
    I must be all that I can be
    and show her I will prevail.
    Success is at hand,
    but she thinks I'm having sex.
    Just because I don't have a man
    doesn't mean I can't achieve success.
    Everything is such a blur
    and in my eyes I just want to be me.
    I'm confused and unsure,
    but finishing school and graduating will set me free.
    Out of all this at least I try!!!

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    stever commented on I Try

    12-26-2009

    my daughter also trys to please her mother..whom i hate to say really dont seem to care..or tell her shes proud..just do as you poem says ..just try..an you will achieve success..and keep writeing ..............

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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