I try...

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  • Emotional

    I try...
    I try; To...

    Hold you when you are alone
    Kiss you when you want my love
    Hug you with my warm hug

    Wink at your soul
    Nuture your spirit; Heart; body

    Paint your essence on Canvas
    to remember that day.

    Sculpt the image of you on marble
    forever be as solid as rock
    clay to mold my passion for you

    Cook for your hold of my heart
    to fill your stomach
    to capture thought that I love you.

    Peer into your soul and give you emotional love.
    Passionate; Powerful; driving
    In spiriing; thoughtfelt; memorible
    life long love

    I try
    on all accounts

    I remember; always your love.

    I try...

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    kittylilly commented on I try...

    11-01-2010

    A very inspring peom and very sweet. this peom gone to my heart.
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    pagaa commented on I try...

    02-11-2009

    always having something new to share,nice work bro
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    NacolleMarie commented on I try...

    02-11-2009

    so much passion, very inspiring! :)
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    Supermike commented on I try...

    02-11-2009

    this one is amazing too whats your secret???
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    Kr1ssy1 commented on I try...

    02-06-2009

    This poem passionately struck me, great use of connotation and figurative language. In life, in love, the most we can do is try and pray it will work out for the best. Love can be so single minded that often leaves us blinded by the passion we feel
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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