I told you so...

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    I told you so...

    night and day is falling fast
    but i know we can make this love last.
    Enternally my pain is set
    but with no love im an easy bet.

    knock knock knock im wide awake.
    stop pounding on my heart to break.
    my heart is shattered,
    but my eyes are clear.
    please someone help me get out of here.

    im sitting here all alone 
    dredding the pain that will never go.
    im lovin you all the way
    but your love is not here to stay.
    tears tears tears are falling fast
    but you cant see you blinded bat.

    stars fall from above with the sun on its side
    but all you have to say is
    bye bye bye.
    you say i love you but your lies are gold
    rich with taste but it only molds.
    please someone get me out of here.

    arms so long, you barely stretch.
    you make it seem so effortless.
    boy, you make me wanna scream and shout
    but on the inside think of doubt.
    these draining seconds of my love
    will come into the nature of...

    hearts rip and tear so 
    i can barely bare.
    hold me tight and never go
    yelling screaming
    i told you so...

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    HarverTomsson commented on I told you so...

    11-18-2010

    Doesn't it just suck when the poetic muse is pain? Stopped by for who can resist an avatar called joybug! Hope that is your typical self. Keep writing. Harv

    Sx9 commented on I told you so...

    11-16-2010

    YES YOU DID,AND CAN ONLY WISH WHAT WE SEE IT TRUE, FOR THE HEART IS A DELICATE PLACE AND SOME TIME OVER REACT TO THE PAINS OF LIFE, YET WE MAKE THE SAME MISTAKES AND THEN i TOLD YOU SO, LOVE YOUR HONESTY,,

    joybug commented on I told you so...

    11-16-2010

    i wrote this poem from the heart, i hope everyone likes it

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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