I thought I could

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    I thought I could

    I thought I could write
    because
    of this pain
    Poetry is an outlet
    for unbearable
    I thought I could
    pull my hair out
    for relief
    it only hurts
    if you let it
    I thought I could be
    grown up and patient
    and strong
    What good is it...
    to lie to myself
    Im crazy with hurt
    with loniness,with fear
    that if I close my eyes
    you'll disappear
    I thought I could slip
    past all those haunted
    emotions...this time
    I thought I could write
    because the paper
    is my friend...

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    Mackalya commented on I thought I could

    05-29-2009

    That's so beautiful & heart-felt. Well done. I hope to read more of these kinds of poems you have, if I may please.

    litldeer commented on I thought I could

    11-08-2008

    I really love this poem. Great job!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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