I Love You

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    • xdavidabramx
    • tear the petals off of you, make you tell the truth // Hole

    I Love You
    slowly die
    stained with white wine
    on my t-shirt
    and jeans

    summer shine

    keep on
    don't stop lying
    to me
    don't die

    i love the way your dress folds over your head

    darken me
    like gold
    chew your stars

    you don't love me, now
    money's on the sky
    tripping now
    shame on your now and then

    summer shine
    summer shines
    summer shine

    the sun overhead
    passion, warmth, shame, lust
    come inside of me
    alive

    breaking down
    sweet barriers
    of you and me
    define it

    summer shines

    i love the way your dress succumbs to my threads
    summer sun shine

    through you
    alive

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    lightcourier commented on I Love You

    05-03-2009

    Nice work. Reminds me of songs by the mountain goats. Thanks!
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    Platti commented on I Love You

    05-02-2009

    I like it ^__^ 'tis sweet =)
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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