I LOVE YOU

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    I LOVE YOU

    ...I hate the day that we met, the thought of you in my head I cant shake loose... I hate the smell of your hair, the way you switched yo dairy air, when you was walking in them heeled boots... I hate how yo eyes blinked, and how you think, the world revolves just for you... I hate i looked you in yo eyes, consoled all yo cries, cause I still don't know if yo i love you's was true... I hate how yo smile seems heaven sent, a trick of strength, is you trying to leave me with pockets bent, I hate i forgave you for yo wrongs, grabbed hold of yo hand threw these storms, I hate it was yo shoulder i cried on, i hate that i cant move on, cause it was me who done wrong, now you gone, and my I LOVE YOU'S wont bring you home...

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    mistyparish commented on I LOVE YOU

    05-06-2009

    That's some true emotions right there. Good work!

    1LostGypsy commented on I LOVE YOU

    02-15-2009

    Very strong words. The best writers are those who have had it rough. I like this one.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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