I dont understand summer and sunshine

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    • I am down but seeking myself and going thru my own rehab to be happy again!

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    I wrote this poem on the bus on this site on my way home! it was inspired by the fact that i see everyone looking good for the summer. Everyone was happy and excited and i did not feel that way. I am happy for people but for me i lost my blaze I am working on it but not quite there. Summer is to public 4 me. I feel like in the summer everyone wants to be a superstar but i hate attention even when i am at my best. i just want to live freely. I want to get out of my slum and make something of myself. I aint on the red carpet! I aint into the paparazzi!i wrote this from my heart. i hope ya like it and i hope ya comment! Thanxs
    ~Lioness4life~

    I dont understand summer and sunshine

     I hate these days, its so public

    Short shorts, icy pops, and everyone looking for a fling

    all i feel is hot, tired and nauseous

    The summer heat making my wig frizz ,people saying diana ross has left the building

    King of pop just died and alot of people cant dry their eyes

    I dont feel the way they feel

    I am so happy 4 him 4 real

    this ugly world just fool of pain who wants to spend another day

    I envy the king i just know he misses his kids and his kids miss him!

    well its summer and since two and a half years ago the sun has not shined the same! Soon to be mother scared as hell

    no support from her man, freind and partner.

    scared that she would be a 19 year old mother single while  living with her psycho mother

    now she had to deal with the fact she was carrying a sick daughter!

    even more distraught cause her daughter wouldn't live to see her mother or for her mother to  hold her and tell her how much she loves her!

     i guess its better that her pain stopped but my sunshine has now dimmed out and hasn't shined since.

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    Mareann commented on I dont understand summer and sunshine

    12-10-2009

    There is a light shines brightly inside of you, just waiting to shine on the outside. thanks, for sharing... Mary
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    SmileyAngel138 commented on I dont understand summer and sunshine

    08-26-2009

    wow this is amazing, i fee the pain and sorrow in this...hope that one day you feel that you are a star and you shine bright...amazing job :-)
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    Lioness4life

    08/26/2009

    Thank u so much! i 4got about this poem. i am slowly trying to getting back 2 that person i used 2 be.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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