I Am (Part I)

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    I Am (Part I)

    I am shallow

    I am below

    When there is no where for me to go

    I grumble and moan

    When I am blue

    I feel the flu

    I get mad

    I furrow my brow

    I hate being me

    Not altogether beautiful, I am just me

    A different kind of girl

    One that makes you wanna hurl

    I am special, and unique in my own kinda way

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    Mrpoetry commented on I Am (Part I)

    06-24-2010

    like i stated before always be true to you good write
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    bluskyinthenite commented on I Am (Part I)

    05-13-2010

    I really do like your sytle of poetry. I'm not altogether beautiful, but am just me Also. I think give it my best too think positve or at lest try my best.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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