How does it feel?

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    How does it feel?

     I am down, and undone.
    Low, and unfeeling.
    I have been beat up, and shot down.
    My low is for the moment.
    My undone feelings will only last a day.
    While I think of things to come
    I ask myself why I feel the need to quit.
    I feel the need to be done.
    I am on my way.
    I am on the road to some where.
    The people that make me feel like I will be down forever....
    Will feel the way I feel some day, and not know where to turn.
    I will not be their sollid rock.
    I will not be their refuge, because they were not mine.
    When I needed people the most they left me out, and in the cold.
    I wonder how they feel now?

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    Qualin commented on How does it feel?

    12-02-2009

    WE ALWAYS NEED FRIENDS ALWAYS...YOU HAVE TO FORGIVE TO BE FORGIVEN DON'T FALL INTO THOSE KIND OF PEOPLE'S CATAGORY BE THEIR SOLID ROCK ..YOU'LL SEE IT ALL COMES BACK TO YOU...QUALIN
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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