HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

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    HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

     IN THE HOSPITAL, I'M DRAWING A BLANK.
    IN THE HOSPITAL, I HAVE A LOW RANK.
    NO INSURANCE DO I HAVE.
    TRYING TO BE BRAVE, I HOPE MY BODY WILL BEHAVE AND NOT BETRAY ME AS COUNTLESS OTHERS.
    NOT ACT LIKE A CARELESS LOVER.
    SITTING IN THIS ROOM, FIGHTING OFF THOUGHTS OF DOOM AND GLOOM.
    MY CHEST IS HURTING.
    IT'S HARD TO BREATHE.
    WILL I EVER GET RELIEF?
    THIS PACKED WAITING ROOM IS BEYOND BELIEF.
    WHO DO I SEE?
    WHO ELSE, BUT MY LOVE.
    SENT TO ME LIKE AN ANGEL FROM ABOVE.
    TO STAY WITH ME.
    TO BRING ME PEACE.
    TO GIVE ME A SENSE OF EMOTIONAL RELIEF.
    EVEN THOUGH, MY PHYSICAL PAIN IS GREAT, TO MY BODY I AM IN TUNE AND CAN RELATE.
    I AM SICK AND TIRED OF THIS WAIT!!!
    TRINA N. THOMAS-EADDY 10/10

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    Tyme commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

    02-23-2011

    8-12 hours...that's the expected wait time in an average EMERGENCY ROOM!!! Hello, did I miss something??? I like.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    04/28/2011

    lol!! exactly my point. thank you for reading and commenting..........E

    FranzJ commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

    12-05-2010

    being a retired Firefighter and EMT, I know what hospotal ERs can be light - if it was a weekend it was crowded (the gun and knife club) if during ythe week its a roll of the dice - good luck in the future
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    12/05/2010

    Thank you for reading and responding as well as your well wishes.........E

    cousinsoren commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

    12-05-2010

    A great capture of a moment in time! My rating for a superb mix of feelings, anxiety and relief, as well as for appropriatee diction is 10+ Reply to Comment
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    12/05/2010

    Thank you for reading and commenting.........E

    cousinsoren commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

    12-05-2010

    A great capture of a moment in time! My rating for a superb mix of feelings, anxiety and relief, as well as for appropriatee diciton is 10+
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE

    12/05/2010

    Thank you for your feedback. It is very much appreciated........E

    smoothdame commented on HOSPITAL EMERGENCY ROOM

    12-01-2010

    good job I like this poem because hospitals can make you crazy it is always good to have company.
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