Heartbreak

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  • Confusion

    Heartbreak

     A thousand tears I have cried for you
    I always prayed your love was true
    But what a fool I have been
    You dont care you just pretend
    Never again will I believe
    The lies you tell me
    My heart is broken
    Cant you see
    I really did believe
    In what could be
    You toyed with my emotions
    You gave me false hope
    Never will I love again
    The pain is to deep
    So forever I shall sleep

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    Saylar commented on Heartbreak

    10-16-2009

    I enjoyed this piece, straight and to the point, simplicity at its best but with power behind it! Thank you for sharing! I have posted this to my facebook page for many to read.
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    Cerene

    10/16/2009

    Thank you. I linked to to my facebook page the night I posted it also.

    LordVasago commented on Heartbreak

    10-12-2009

    Ohh i love this one. Can literally feel what you are feeling here.
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    Cerene

    10/16/2009

    you always know what I am feeling my friend. ((hugs 2 u))

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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