Goodbye

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  • Confusion
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  • Life
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  • Love
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  • Emotional
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  • Lost Love
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  • Loss

    Goodbye

     Dont shed a tear
    As I say good bye
    For I will shed them for you
    Through out the night
     I will cry
    Without you
    Things wont be the same
    My heart shall always
    Whisper you namen
    Until the day I die
    We are not meant to be
    Our hearts know the truth
    We cant not pretend
    Alone is what I am
    Now until the end

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    LordVasago commented on Goodbye

    09-06-2009

    Beautiful poem Cerene. I know your aunt is proud of yo and looking down on you at this moment with nothing but love. You have done her proud.
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    Cerene

    09/06/2009

    ((Thank You))

    ccslim commented on Goodbye

    09-06-2009

    I really like how the tempo of this begins. I did feel kind of lost for a second at the end but to reread brought understanding.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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