Heart in a Shadow

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    • nangy
    • after getting a "broken link" message, i am back and it feels good :D

    Poem Commentary

    This is my first attempt at writing a poem, I welcome all honest and constructive comments. 

    Heart in a Shadow

    It’s hard living in darkness

    When you know the hands that cast the shadow

    When eyes have an absence of love

    Hope is a fruitless virtue

    a downward spiral greets a cry for help

     

    My eyes have seen many winters

    but none as cold as this

    When hands that were to protect

    are clenched in hateful anger

    an absence of compassion

    When eyes that were bright

    are dark with deception

     

    I sit in the darkness

    Cast by once tender hands

                once loving eyes

    How can I lift my hands

    to defend against such hands and eyes?

    I can’t help but surrender

    To living in darkness

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    JamilahAyanna commented on Heart in a Shadow

    11-23-2009

    This was amazingly powerful and it had such a deep meaning, its hard to believe that the ones we used to love can be the very ones that have us feeling trapped.....I loved it and I hope u continue to write....

    wizthom commented on Heart in a Shadow

    08-12-2009

    beautiful longing lost in despair hopelessness you have captured the true essence of darkness very well,,u are a very good writer,,u have the gift of emotion peace wizthom ..

    theladyz commented on Heart in a Shadow

    08-03-2009

    I know this darkness, too well. Thankfully, I managed to escape it years ago, and only the scars remain. I hope you have as well.

    Strider commented on Heart in a Shadow

    07-31-2009

    You certainly are no novice to writing poetry, this is well expressed. Good work.

    DeepEclipse commented on Heart in a Shadow

    07-21-2009

    And soon you fall in love with it.....hugging it close as the only love you know. I know this well. You explain this well, showing feeling of sorrow, yet we must continue on. Such frustration. Well written.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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