He Was Right

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He Was Right

Ive walked clueless for years
And came to a conclusion of only tears
Words left on mute,
Feelings put on pause,
And priceless moments pressed on fast forward
With each step that I take I grow older,
And with each desicion I make I grow wiser.
And with each card I'm delt I just found a better advantage of the deck.
Every scene of exsistence plays a mis-understood part in this cycle we call life.
And as I proceed deeper and deeper into what the world sees, I will grow deeper and deeper in misery.
And I never understood what my father told me until this day,
He said: "one friend is one too many".

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warsaw commented on He Was Right

08-23-2009

I disagree with your father about having a friend smile but I love your work thank you for sharing sincerely WARSAW

Soulavenger commented on He Was Right

06-10-2009

Someone once told me that being "right" doesn't make a difference and leaves you with no rewards. You are a wise young lady. If I may, I think that is why you escape to write these poems...to escape from what the world sees because I know in your heart, you see something better.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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