HE FADES :(

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    i wrote this poem one night to the guy i thought i loved and he's gone && till this day i still miss him ::)

    HE FADES :(

        He's in my rearview I see the dude that. I was willing to give my heart to <3 to fading away~. He knows he's leaving but he won't bother. To tell me I drive faster he fades I drive slower he still fades. I just wish the world would just hold up & pause. So I could get out and kiss him before he's really gone. Dayum he's really moving on & I just want him to stop stay right here with me. Now he's really gone and nothing but a trail of sand replaces. where he used to stand we didnt get to even dance or last dance....

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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