H.A.T.E

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    H.A.T.E

    i Hate the world and what it has come to
    i cant stand Anything at all
    i can Taste the fear on my trembling lips
    i Eventually have to realize that everythings not okay

    i Have no one whose like my dad to guide me along the way
    i Aint gonna put up with it for too much longer
    i am not going to Tell him to care for his eldest
    i Even cant get him to call

    i want him to grab my Hand and tell me its not my fault
    i want Any sign from him to show me that he cares
    i Tell myself that he doesnt like me and hed rather be with her
    i Envy kim so much because she took him away from me

    i Handle my feelings with care because im sensitive
    i cant stand All the things hes ever put me through
    i am done writing This poem because i know hes never gonna read it
    i hate my life and Everything is bullshit and i dont need that

    i use the word hate instead of a rhyme and it has H.A.T.E in every line

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    pinkc78 commented on H.A.T.E

    01-14-2011

    This is genius

    DeepEclipse commented on H.A.T.E

    04-07-2009

    Smooth style. How you put HATE in each line was poeticness. Keep your imagination alive.

    randa commented on H.A.T.E

    03-13-2009

    i love it grl

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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