Happy Birthday

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    Happy Birthday
    I feel myself blush
    As I'm hit with this rush
    Its been quite awhile
    Since I've been able to smile
    With such joy
    Like I was a little boy
    When you leaned in to kiss
    I was filled with such bliss
    I'm now the most unlucky of men
    Because it will never happen again

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    optimistic commented on Happy Birthday

    07-02-2009

    In time this will happen again when fate leads you in the right direction, I feel as if I'm going thru the same turnoil as we speak, and so I'm glad we meet this poem gives you such strong talent so the words of unhappiness with this poem bring you back to balance. Don't ponder on hard times please just keep pushing for something real to happen and in time it will. in time it will we all deserve this, great write short and solid on the point.
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