Haiku Part 4: Appeal

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    Haiku Part 4: Appeal

     I was found guilty
    A clock strikes with surreal peace
    I think of deceased

    In my room, I lie
    Surrounded by my denial
    For another trial

    I eat my last meal
    Words cannot tell how I feel
    Young death is unreal

    Minutes are freedom
    Slipping through the hands of some
    When will people come?

    I see blurry faces
    Those who relate to my case
    Night time shrouds the place

    While people watch, I die
    Trying to remain conscious
    I only ask 'why?'

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    WordSlinger commented on Haiku Part 4: Appeal

    12-21-2009

    This is hard core as well, another great haiku, :) WS
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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