Guardian Angel

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Guardian Angel



I am watching through a window

I can see you standing there

You are distanced

But I hear you

I am wishing you were here

I can’t feel you but I want to

Have you hold me close to you

What can I do

What can I say

I am so in love with you

And I’m falling fast

I don’t want tot break it

And I’m falling fast

Won’t you come and save me

Like a guardian angel

Like a guardian angel

When I see you all that I do

Is feel you watching me

And that you feel

The very same way as me

To be near you

And to feel you

So that you and I are complete

And you’re falling fast

You don’t want to break it

And you’re falling fast

You want me to save you

Like a guardian angel

Like a guardian angel

We have promised to each other

We will do all we can do

So that we can make this love that we have

A reality to come true

And we’re falling fast

We don’t want to break it

And we’re falling fast

And we want to save it

Like a guardian angel

Like a guardian angel

    Like a guardian angel…….

 

 

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SkylarValentine commented on Guardian Angel

04-17-2014

I loved how well spun the words were with both the 'feel' of your love and your fear. My only thought while reading this is that maybe it could have been broken up into stanza's so the viewer could really digest the beauty in each line. Instead it gets rather jumbled together, and with no break or pause, my eyes started to skim a little bit (sorry). There are parts of this where the lines repeat, even just a little, that could be the stop of each stanza. But without the physical space they were not so noticeable. Still I enjoyed the write. Well done.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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