Gone?

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    just some things on my mind i guess...

    Gone?

    i watched you go under
    i watched you go down
    i was falling with you
    we were going together
    we are still falling
    and will remain that way
    well, until we strike a vain to deep
    when the blade goes against us
    and makes us bleed permanet
    for i fear that day
    but not as much as i long for it
    the feeling of floating and leaving the earth kind of excites me
    yet of my excitement, i am fearful
    afraid to leave the ones i love
    for they might do the same as me
    they may cry, and even more
    but this world is so hard, so difficult
    so, yes, i do look forward to the day
    where you and i will leave this place
    but also, i fear for the same reason

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    eddie14 commented on Gone?

    04-15-2010

    i thought the same way about going out of this world but i learned to let go and go on i hope to see you on the other side

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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