Cycle of Life

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i wrote this while i was in english class. im not sure why but it just came to mw. i heop you enjoy

Cycle of Life

friends fight
families hate
everything falling down around me
yelling, screaming, crying
is anything enough?
everything you do is wrong
every step you make is in the wrong direction
loves come and go
loves un-true, painful
left alone by so many
and loved by so less
the arms that were once around you, gone
gone forever
and the emptyness?
there for a life time
no where to go
no where to hide
nothing to do
running in place
no ground coverd
the ground is gone
you fall into what feels like an endless black pit
to find out its not endless
and you hit a hard, cold floor
then the cycle re-starts itself again
and this is called the cycle of life

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girlygirl1234 commented on Cycle of Life

04-27-2010

wow..........this is really good. i like it alot good write. you keep on writing girl.......GG

Musicmynded1 commented on Cycle of Life

04-13-2010

Wow,, many facets in this i do like... keep venting my dear, when ur older like me, ull see that u may still be left alone but u just hold that middle finger up a little higher... 10+

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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