Gone

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    Gone

    It feels like years since I've seen you last. Laughing, smiling, warm sincere.
    Seeing you so weak was the hardest part. I feel a giant hurt inside my heart.
    The missing you is the longest part. I long to hear your voice, see your face, you should be sitting over there.
    Such a huge loss for me, for us, for the world.
    I hope, hope, hope I will see you again one day and you will greet me with your smile, your laugh, your joy.
    I hope you know how loved you are, how missed you are.
    Why, why, why so soon, The only time I see the you I know is in my mind, in my dreams.
    If I could just reach out and touch you and hold you I would never let you go....one day I will see you again, I will see you again.

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    ArgusWayne commented on Gone

    03-27-2010

    A beautiful emotional piece that anyone can relate to...that's what makes a great poem. Nice!

    dahlusion commented on Gone

    09-08-2009

    A lovely poetic lament for the one we long for and who is gone forever. A master piece!

    gallaxy commented on Gone

    08-30-2009

    The departure of a loved one from this earth is hard to swallow. Its thier love and pleasant thoughts and remembrances that keeps them alive in us always........

    lonewolf commented on Gone

    04-04-2009

    very heartfelt. the pain you feel will disappear, the memory of your friend is yours to keep.

    Phoenix9 commented on Gone

    12-12-2008

    very well written and so true

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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