God's Little Girls

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    To Natasha, my first baby!
    I Love You

    08/1989 - 03/1990

    God's Little Girls

     God made little girls with pretty smiles and bouncing curls.
    A warm heart and a cheery way, will always bring a sunny day.
    They love little doggies.  And sometimes, even froggies.
    They love the birds up in the sky.  Watching close with wonder in eye.
    They seem to grow up way to fast.  It's hard to imagine five years past.
    Before we know it, they will all be women, with girls of their own when God is willing.

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    poetress77 commented on God's Little Girls

    12-10-2009

    that's a cute dedication to your babygirl, it shows a tender heart
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    bforibus commented on God's Little Girls

    11-02-2009

    . i loved the rhyming scheme and the emotion of this poem. its diffently a verbal lesson to man. to not only treasure their children but as innocent and fragile as lil girls are. they are indeed need of societies protection. great job again
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    3eyedfred

    11/02/2009

    thank you again! however, I get the impression that you don't give your opinions lightly... true?

    3eyedfred

    11/02/2009

    thank you again! however, I get the impression that you don't give your opinions lightly... true?

    3eyedfred

    12/29/2009

    Thank you for seeing past the sing-song (shoulda been a Hallmark card) cutesy exterior of this first attempt at putting on paper, what was a lot of folks first peak at a softer side of me thought to not exist until then.

    3eyedfred

    12/29/2009

    Thank you for seeing past the sing-song (shoulda been a Hallmark card) cutesy exterior of this first attempt at putting on paper, what was a lot of folks first peak at a softer side of me thought to not exist until then.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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