Free at Last

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    • 3eyedfred
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    Free at Last

    This goes out to all the users.
    All those folks to weak to find their own.
    Taking from the very souls opened to their needs. 
    We have opened homes and hearts.
    Giving of ourselves freely.

    The takers take until all the wells are dry.
    Takers turning away when the usefulness is gone.
    Never say thank you.
    No gratitude or appreciation.
    Why think of consequences, or a concern for the inevitable cause and effect?

    The time always comes when the givers continue to give.
    And the takers?.. They're left with who they hate above all!...
    THEMSELVES!!

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    bforibus commented on Free at Last

    11-02-2009

    and the greatest fight is with self. i love it. its a powerful testament of equality. and the ones that rebel against it. great job on controlling the emotion.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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