Futility

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  • Nature

    Futility

    The clouds approach breaking into sobs

    And washing away the sun’s eye

    Watching the world with subtle sunshine

    Glancing off of faces

    And onto the sidewalk

    Soon to be drenched in the fear

    The sadness of nature

    Crying out to my world

    Telling us

    That time is of little importance

    If death is all it will receive

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    lillyrain commented on Futility

    05-22-2009

    I really like this one it is really good. I like message of it and everything. I also like all the personification in it.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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