Friends and lovers

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    I am in love with a stranger and this explains that they are in live and they don't know it they love them back!

    Friends and lovers

     Friends come and go.
    True loves stay till the end.
    I don't know who you are,
    or what you've done,
    where you've been, or,
    who you love!
    You are a stranger in the mist.
    You walked in and stole my heart for you own.
    You gave it back,
    now I am giving it to you
    It is yours untill you give it back again.
    You are mine and I am yours
    If you'll have me
    If you want me!
    If not, I shall wate for you.
    I will wate as long as it takes.
    For your haert and mine to combine and be together till the end of life as we know it!

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    dander39 commented on Friends and lovers

    12-16-2018

    I like it I really like the brevity and the simple complexity of the poem
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    shay757 commented on Friends and lovers

    10-17-2009

    i like this poem its real keep up the good work !!
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    deathgoth01

    10/20/2009

    thank you i was writing a book and it came to me then i wrote it

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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