Freedom

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    I want to fly!
    I hate being traped in this shell!
    I want me to be me!!!!

    Freedom

     Freedom is the strangth of being you.

    When I'm Free I Feel like an eagle that spreds its wings a flys where it wants yo go.

    Freedom is happiness.

    I am free and happy to be me.

    Freedom is a dream.
    Since dreams can't be capture either can freedom!


    I am traped in a shell
    Wishing I could fly and be me
    I can't

    Freedom is...
    love
    peace
    sadness
    madness.

    Freedom is the thing if I had I would?...
    BE ME!!!

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    queendee commented on Freedom

    09-07-2009

    i LIKE YOUR POEM. i HAVE SO OFTEN LOOKED FOR FREEDOM MYSELF AND TO SOME EXTENT STILL AM. BUT WHAT I AM BEGINNING TO LEARN IS THAT FREEDOM COMES THROUGH THE SEARCH OF YOUR SELF. ATLEAST FOR ME AND TO BE ME I FIRST HAVE TO FIGURE OUT WHO ME IS. NOT WHAT OTHERS VIEW OR OPINON OF ME IS BUT WHAT AND WHO I AM, THE GOOD BAD AND UNGLY. EVEN WITH BEING ME IT MAY NOT BE FREE BECAUSE U MAY SEE THINGS THAT YOU MAY NOT LIKE. BUT ITS ABOUT THE ACCEPTACE OF THE WHOLE PICTURE, THE GOOD BAD AND UGLY. FIND YOUR SELF AND LOVE YOURSELF WITH EVERYPART THAT IS THERE. BECAUSE THE THINGS YOU DONT LIKE YOU CAN CHANGE (WHICH IS NOT EASY) BUT IT IS FREEING TO FIND ACCEPTANCE WITHIN YOURSELF NO MATTER WHAT OTHERS MAY THINK SAY OR IMPLY. IT SOUNDS LIKE DRIBBLE I KNOW, BUT TAKE IT AS FOOD FOR THOUGHT. KEEP WRIGHTING AND DONT THINK THAT I AM WRITING WITH ALL KNOWLEGE BECAUSE AS YOU WILL SEE IN SOME OF MY POEMS I HAVE A GREAT DEAL OF FREEDOM ISSUES MYSELF. SMILES HUGS AND MUCH LOVE, DEE
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    deathgoth01

    09/07/2009

    thank you for thinking that! And you are so right!

    deathgoth01

    09/07/2009

    thank you for thinking that! And you are so right!

    sandyb commented on Freedom

    09-03-2009

    I know what it feels to want freedom. I long for the GREAT ESCAPE... Someday soon for both of us.... That was great....
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    deathgoth01

    09/07/2009

    thanx! I really just want to live and I can't do that untill I fly with the wind in my face! In my dreams..

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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