Fountain of my Soul...

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    Fountain of my Soul...

    Walking on the lake shore path the other night
    So calm n quiet
    It seemed I've longed for such beauty far too long

    Sitting on d dock
    Flashes of light across the lake
    Gave me visions yet untold
    D glaring waters so calm
    With such soothing feel
    Aroused my hunger for passion
    That moment felt like heaven
    Overwhelming it was but empty

    Walking back
    I envisioned walking in d woods of paradise
    An aura filled with love
    D tender touch of d wind
    Blew a subtle smile upon my face
    Such a beautiful disguise
    Of my matchless hands
    Homeless heart

    Then I wished upon d stars
    For something
    Something so true to be real
    So real to be true
    But it were only wishes
    Indeed am empty

    ~Wondering Soul~

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    ilovemyboy commented on Fountain of my Soul...

    03-07-2012

    so cool i like it it just speaks to you you are a really good writher and this is just so cool i love it a lot

    aysha commented on Fountain of my Soul...

    07-17-2009

    Awesome Poem You have a true gift and I enjoyed reading

    lovebird4eva

    07/18/2009

    Thanx. u r d best... :)

    Dreamcatcher commented on Fountain of my Soul...

    05-22-2009

    I real felt the love it that, and enjoy the writing. But the one thing I need to complain/ correct. Don't use abbevation like D and N write the full word other then that I like it,

    lovebird4eva

    07/18/2009

    I'll take not of those flaws... thnx dear...

    ladypoet commented on Fountain of my Soul...

    05-22-2009

    Homeless heart....thats deep vision for the ears to see, and the eyes to hear. ..I like this..it gives a sense of peace yet deceit....its very much reality...much love Kay -Lady P

    lovebird4eva

    07/18/2009

    :) u av a way with words... 10x

    TrueLove89 commented on Fountain of my Soul...

    12-17-2008

    Wow I really enjoyed this poem siir...Keep it up I look foward to reading more of your work

    lovebird4eva

    07/18/2009

    I enjoyed writin it too ma'am... :D thnx

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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