Fly Home

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Kind of tried from the norm here. Just trying something a little different. Again, from my blog. http://www.ydtarot.blogspot.com

Fly Home

You wanna break free from those chains,
Wanna make it on your own, worked so hard to get there,
How you gonna feel all alone,
Where you gonna go, who you gonna be,
What do you think, they're gonna think of me,
Don't really care, just gotta get away, just be alone today,
so far from home.
Moonlight, Starshine,
Carry me away,
Up on that magical ride,
Just hangin' on, sure it'll be alright,
Fly me away,
Please don't go to sleep,
Gotta stay alive,
Trapped deep within, Gonna have to let go,
Have to be good to myself, but I'm risking my soul,
We reach for the sun, and get burned by the crown,
They just laugh and they stare,
As we crash to the ground,
Moonlight, Starshine,
Carry me away,
Up on that magical ride,
Just hangin' on, sure it'll be alright,
Please don't go to sleep,
Gotta stay alive,
Where you gonna go, who you gonna be,
What do ya think they're gonna see in me,
Don't care,
Go away,
Be,
Alone,
So far, So far,
Home..

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cliftondurant commented on Fly Home

09-02-2009

what made you crash why you rather be alone what ever it is can it be work out

Ydorj

09/02/2009

Not really a personal experience. More along the lines of the shooting star that gets caught up in their world of excesses. Thank you for the comment. I appreciate your read.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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