Fly Away

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    Written for a very special person in my life

    Fly Away

    My life seems better
    im a little stronger
    i dont cry as much anymore
    i seem to be able to smile again
    the days seem to go bye
    with out any falling tears
    the nights are getting better
    i can sometimes turn out the light
    i dont have as many bad dreams
    im trying to get by
    i no in order for you to remeber
    i must not hold on so tight
    im letting you go
    because as the old saying goes
    if you are truely ment to be with me
    you will return
    so fly away my beautiful angel
    and ill pray
    that in the end
    you'll fly right back to me

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    Rayen commented on Fly Away

    12-16-2009

    its very pretty i like this poem its a poem showing thAT ITS HARD BUT YOU CAN MAKE IT

    1Shattered1

    12/17/2009

    Thank you

    SpiritSong commented on Fly Away

    07-11-2009

    very nice....thank you as my heart is there as well..may Abba Father give you Joy and abundant laughter ...yet again...and may you know His peace

    1Shattered1

    12/17/2009

    Thank you.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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