FLORDELIZA..My Forever Love by RCBaltazar

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    FLORDELIZA..My Forever Love by RCBaltazar

     F ar across the horizon I see her winsome smile

    L uring my decayed body I am gladly resurrected

    O ver the hills and plains empty promises I shouted

    R eaching the summit I soar mile after mile

    Deceived by the notion of a humdrum commotion

    E nough to capture the breeze and breathe a new life

    L inking ourselves together we will score a good fight

    I am nothing without her as she glides by my side

    Z ooming the minutest no matter how little becomes wide

    A s if staring a microscope everything is a huge scope.

    Flordeliza...

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    blueberry commented on FLORDELIZA..My Forever Love by RCBaltazar

    07-28-2010

    This is a very interesting acrostic poem you created.
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    momonbaltazar

    07/31/2010

    flordeliza is my loving wife..thanks for liking my romantic poem...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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